Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


Here you go have a smile,
They’re on the house today
A tiny one can go a mile
I’ll give you one for free

Been in this trade for 18 years
Making people happy
Ignoring all my tears
I’ve put my loved ones first

Number One, that was you
That was you all along
Except for when I needed you
A blank look was all I saw

Then It happened,
Something I’d rather forget
My life and memories blackened
But still, smiles are on me today.

Now you’ve gone for good
You say I don’t care
But as ever, as you know I would
Smiles are on me today

My tower is falling down
Even my family has given in
Instead of the smile they wear a frown
Whenever I walk in the room.

I don’t understand what I’ve done
I don’t know why you pick on me
I wish this mess could be undone
So that once more
Smiles can be on me.
©2006-2010 ~ithinkineedahug
:iconithinkineedahug:

Author's Comments

haven't written anything in ages. this is the result of one of the worst days i've had in ages.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconuuuinfinity:
:thumbsup: :D

--
Terribly SORRY for late replies when I'm on hiatus/lurking!

"Anyone who has never made a mistake has never tried anything new." ~ Albert Einstein
:iconithinkineedahug:
hehe ta

--
:sadangel: You are the wind beneath my wings...
:iconuuuinfinity:
:hug:

--
Terribly SORRY for late replies when I'm on hiatus/lurking!

"Anyone who has never made a mistake has never tried anything new." ~ Albert Einstein
:iconmorbid-engel:
Very nice piece. I love the message. Only them can suggest as critique is maybe some metre work. But an exelent piece none-the-less.

--
Am I an optimist? I hope so.
:iconithinkineedahug:
aw thanks, yer my metre work isnt great...needs some focusing on me thinks

--
:sadangel: You are the wind beneath my wings...
:iconsteve555666:
A great piece! Awesome job:D

--
"She Isn't Real... I Can't Make Her Real..."
'Don't Be Popular, Be Yourself.'
'The Things That Cause Us The Most Pain Are Those Which Are Left Untold.'

Other Deviant Accounts:
[link] -7Steve7-
:iconithinkineedahug:
aww thanks :) i cheered up LOADS since yesterday toooo lol.

--
:sadangel: You are the wind beneath my wings...
:iconsteve555666:
Lol, nice.

--
"She Isn't Real... I Can't Make Her Real..."
'Don't Be Popular, Be Yourself.'
'The Things That Cause Us The Most Pain Are Those Which Are Left Untold.'

Other Deviant Accounts:
[link] -7Steve7-
:iconblackeagle01:
I do like it darling :) see, bad days always have a plus :P I love the repetition, very effective :)
I love you
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

--
Violence Never Solves Anything...

:omfg: :chainsaw:

However Big Your Chainsaw Is...

:spam: :chainsaw:

It Will Never Defeat Spam.

:spam:

Spam Is Good.
- - - -
Unknown-Poet-Project

Found in these Groups:

Not currently found in a Group

Details

April 8, 2006
1.1 KB

Statistics

9
2 [who?]
66 (0 today)
1 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map